Saturday, 30 March 2013

Comment to Rachel's final fan fiction

I haven't watched the movie before so it's a little difficult for me to figure out the relationship between these characters. However, the person's internal description is very good. The only problem is I didn't feel it like a thriller novel. But still, good to read your novel. Well done.

1 comment:

  1. Oh,I see, I would better explain about the realationship between the characters :) Thanks for commenting it!

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