Thursday, 7 March 2013

Mala's Fanfiction Planning

Fandom: Rise of the Guardians
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Friendship, Angst
Character/s: Jack, Bunnymund
Rating: PG

Title: Taken for granted
Audience: Teenagers

Info
POV: Bunnymund-first person
Setting: Bunny's warren
Plot: It was always something they had taken for granted. After thousands of years of being around, they never really thought about it anymore. That is until Bunny takes notice of something and decides to investigate further.....

This is the whole Jack/Bunny, Hurt/Comfort Fanfiction link until I find specific stories>> [Fanfiction link :D]

<A bit vivid in goriness>
The Warning 

Jack is caught by Pitch and when Bunnymund finds him, it is up to him and the other Guardians to put their little Frostbite back together.

I love this fanfic, it was one of the earlier one's that I read and I enjoy this because it shows Jack and his determination to look after his new family even though he is rather useless without his Shepard's crook.

<Light and fluffy>
Liquid Snowflakes 

Jack is stuck in Bunnymunds Warren during a storm and finds out he isn't a fan of thunder. He eventually finds comfort from Bunny. Just light and fluffy.

This fanfic is very cute and sweet, well thought out and cleverly worded. You can tell the writer really thought about each word they typed and how they wanted to portray everything within the story from descriptions of their surroundings to what each character said. The relationship between Jack and Bunny is a very interesting one, with their strong rivalry, and to see Bunny comfort Jack even though they seem to hate each other is rather enjoyable to read.

<Similar to what I want to write>
Reprimand

Jack makes a mistake and he and Bunny end up lost with a young believer, and no way home except for walking. On their journey back, Bunny comes to realise a few things about Jack that will change his opinions about the mischievous winter spirit forever.

Bunny is harsh in this fic with his short, pain-induced fuse, but when he learns more about Jack and the struggles he has with his powers, we get to see another, more softer side to him.As this is a prequel to

<Another fluffy story>
 ROTG: And Time Goes Marching On


Just a couple of one shots about Jack and his loneliness, and his attempts at getting the other Guardians to take notice of him a little. Bunny comes to the rescue.

Another good fanfic to see again their unlikely relationship and for Jack to see how much Bunny and the other Guardians really care. Just two words however; spell check!

Hunger

Jack forgot what hunger felt like after all these years so when he tastes food at Christmas dinner, he can't stop.

This fanfic was very similar to what I wanted to write in the beginning. It was a great fanfic to see what the other Guardians thought of poor Jack and his dilemma when it comes to food.



DRAFT:

It wasn’t something I, E. Aster Bunnymund, nor the other Guardians (minus Sandy of course) ever really had to think about. We had all been with the basic necessity for so long that we barely gave a thought about where it came from and having to find more for our survival; it was always just there for our taking. In a way I suppose we just took it all for granted.

Although we were immortal Guardians, going without food for too long would weaken us until we were only surviving from the power of our believers.

Us elder Guardians were fortunate, however, as our believers numbered in the hundreds of thousands and missing meals never affected us. But Jack Frost, the Spirit of Winter, was another case.

After over 300 years of being invisible, he had only managed to gather 7 believers. The energy of 7 believers was definitely not enough to survive on, and after 5 years of being a Guardian, it was beginning to show. We had all noticed the way he practically inhaled his food during the annual Christmas celebratory dinner and how he would sneak a few extras into his hoodie, but I guess we all assumed it was for a midnight snack and not for later meals as we only recently found out.

Over 300 years Jack had been alone, and now even after 5 years of being a Guardian, we only now realised out how rough he had it. After 5 years of being a family, and we never noticed how much he was hurting.

The day had started out like any other.

I was sat perched atop a rock surrounded by a grassy field, happily painting the fifteenth Easter egg of the day. I dipped my 0000 brush into the small container of white, and brought it up to the light blue egg. I gently crafted a snowflake over the curved surface and paused to survey the egg for a brief moment. Suddenly, a growl startled me out of my appraisal glanced up to the sky, surprised to see the red and orange hues colouring the clouds

“Tucka’ time.” I muttered to myself, gently placing the egg down and packing up my supplies before hopping off towards my hut. As I neared my home a small snap of a twig had me whipping out my boomerangs and holding them out threatening towards the direction of the sound. I let out a relieved sigh and relaxed my arms at the sight of a soft white mop of hair and a peak of a blue hoodie.

“Dammit Frostbite! You nearly gave me a heart attack!” I reprimanded the boy who at least had the decency to look guilty.

“Sorry about that.” He said with a sheepish grin, floating down with his Shepard’s crook in hand, as usual. “I just thought I’d come to visit my favourite Kangaroo.” He added with a cheeky grin. My eyes narrowed slightly at the not-so-subtle sneaky attempt at a jibe but the anger faded when I got a good look at the winter sprite. The already frail looking and tiny sprite was slouched over slightly as if he was incredibly tired. His 

5 comments:

  1. I do love Bunnymund, esp, when he lost his power and become the cutest bunny i've even seen.

    Your story is very interesting.

    Just a little suggestion. How about make the font a little bigger? Will be easier to read.

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  2. Look forward to your final one.

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    1. I know right? Bunny was sooo adorable! :D

      Aw thanks :D

      Yeah I really don't know what's going on with the font D:
      I hope it looks ok now :3

      Final one is up now :D it was a challenge trying to keep it under 1000 words though D:

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